СОР № 1 Английский язык 9 класс Unit: Hobbies and QualitiesНазад
Unit: Hobbies and Qualities
Read the statement and write an opinion essay on topic: “People should make money from their hobbies”
You should: Complete the table and use it as a plan for your essay. Give your opinion supported by reasons and / or examples. Use pre-verbal, post-verbal and end-position adverbs, use comparative degree adverb structures with regular and irregular adverbs. Write 3 paragraphs (introduction, main body and conclusion). Check your essay using essay editing checklist.
Essay editing checklist
Do you have an introduction, main body and conclusion in your essay?
Do you have reasons/examples in your essay?
Do your sentences and paragraphs connect coherently?
Do your sentences complete (have a noun and a verb)?
Do you use adverbs (recently, however, nearly, there, well, more effectively, better, worse, etc.)?
Is your essay written in a formal tone? Is spelling and grammar correct?
The people need to make money from their hobbies. Why not ? I saw only good ways like earn money, do what you like. And with it you can stay with a good mental health.
The second reason is that you can please yourself and other people with your hobby. When you do your hobby you feel better for sure.